Ever since I can remember
I walked , talked
gold , silver , yellow , green dreams ,
floating forever
on the causeless buoyancy
of mind , body , spirit and soul ,
which often built
huge bridges
overlooking majestic rivers
reaching out
to wilderness wildly.
akash
6 comments:
loved it dear brother ..i wonder sometimes how words can create an illusion of feeling ..an illusion of experience ...but then i wonder if there are translation errors when one tries to comprehend something thru bridges of words ... but then does it matter ... may be all the transalations are beutiful ...
Regards,
I don't know , dear dipti ,
I really don't know.
What are translation errors ?
Can you give examples ?
akash
Smiles..dont worry dear brother..i apologize to be so vague..i guess i was just talking to myself...
what i meant was that sometimes your words are so animate that person reading feels that they probably can feel what you must have felt while writing those words...
but then i negated myself , by thinking that you might have felt something different while writing... although person who is reading might feel the effect of same words if might be a different feeling ....and that is what i called a translation error ....
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hope this does not sounds like just blabbering
Regards,
Dear dipti ,
Thank you for clarifying . As you said , clarifying can never clarify enough.
Our understanding meets somewhere in between in the middle ground of nothingness ,
through oh so many masks , shadows , glories .....
Such is human condition . i guess
we go far beyond conditions . My words flow freely . I don't force them , I don't stop them . they fly , swim , run , stay still as though held by unseen forces .
I am a mere conduit . Which perhaps means the feelings are there somewhere within .....
I don't know what you meant by animate ?
I don't know what feelings they evoked in you .
Thank you so much for this valuable sharing , dear dipti .
akash
I agree with you dear brother..your words flow freely ..they do fly , swim , run ....
and as far as discussing , analysing or clarifying these words go ... its trying to probably analyze the fragrance and colors of flowers ...i guess i am just happy to enjoy and feel the magic of these flowers...
Thank you , dear one .
akash
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